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A Vulnerable Submission

A vulnerable submission

As she lets me in

Inside all of her

Her soul

Her bones

Her desire

Her eyes

Her life

She lets me inside all of it

I can see it in her eyes

Permission

To take her

And love her


And I

Give her the same look with my eyes

I submit

She gets all of me

All of me deep inside of her


Two people

Becoming one

Merging together

Two life lines

Two minds

Two souls

Intertwined

Stopping time

Nothing but breath, flesh, pleasure, desire

And love

True love

Making it 

And expressing it


She submits to me

And I lose myself on her lips

I submit to to way she crawls on top of me

And moves her hips


I submit to her

She submits to me

And together 

We build to something special


She can’t help but moan and say my name

And I can’t help but do the same


We’ve agreed to try

To submit to each other 

10,000 more times


What a life. 


CH 8/28/25

 
 
 

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