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Writer's picture: Clint HaugenClint Haugen

He was 19 when he lost his wife . . .


They took her during the night

  Those bastards

They took in the night for their fun 

   A few drunken idiots

Who didn’t like him

   And who always lusted over her

They took her for their fun

    Real sick fucks

Real sick

    

He met her when they were both 11 years old 

    She used to dance gracefully

And sing beautifully 

   Everyone loved her

Everyone that met her really loved her

   They couldn’t help it

 She was light

   In the darkness

She was pure

   In a world full tainted souls

She loved so truly

   So deeply

And for some reason

   She loved him

An angry boy

   With a temper

A degenerate

    A boy without a real home

A broken child

   Almost a beast

   But

That wasn’t how she saw him

   No

She called him her Sun

   And all she wanted from him

Was to shine


   Well,

That was before they took her in the night

   He doesn’t want to shine now

No

   All he can do

Is rage

   He lost his Sunflower

    And he loved her truly

As much as a broken boy could love something so beautiful—so precious

    He loved her with his bones—with his soul. 

Everything he was loved her

    But . . .


They still took her in the night

    And they had their fun with her

And then they left her in the woods

   Bloody and bruised

But

   She was strong

And she walked on

   Limping badly

Tears streaming down her face

   The moonlight illuminated her red hair

As well as the blood that was on her face 

   She said one thing over and over again

His name

   She said his name over and over again

As if she was in a trance

   

They told him that she didn’t stop saying his name until . . .

    Until she was gone forever . . .


He screamed in the hospital

   He punched holes in the white walls

Everyone looked at him with terror

   As he became a wild animal

All he could see was the color red


She was the only goodness he had

   She had been the only light inside of his soul

She was the only moral code he knew

   Now

He was unleashed

   He was rage

He was pain

   He was suffering

He was injustice 

  

Well, he found those men

   And what he did to them . . .



He’s 30 now

   And vengeance didn’t make him feel any better

Revenge only works once

   And afterwards

He was still broken

   Still full of rage

Still lonely 

   The pain never ceased 

She was in every dream

  Suffering in every breath

Hatred in every step

   He was a monster

Carved by the world

   Molded by man

A monster of God’s creation

    Thrown down into hell

To become Satan’s

   But

He doesn’t believe in all that

   He only ever believed in her


Shining seemed like an impossible task

   After she passed

But

   That was all she wanted from him

She loved him the way that he was, a degenerate

  But she knew he could be better

She knew the demons he fought with

   And figured light was the only antidote 

She had a vision of what he could become

    And . . .

In his dreams

   She reminded him of that vision 

She would tell him to believe in something again

  Anything

It didn’t matter

   As long as he believed in something 

But he always woke up cold 

   Alone

And the dreams just hurt

   He hated waking from them

To join the world that molded him

   He hated all the eyes that saw him

A fire burned inside 

   It burnt his bones

And took hold of his soul

  

There was no redemption here for him

   Or so he thought

But

   Life is a mystery

Everyone must stand alone . . .

  Even a hollow man can find a home . . .


And when he heard a gentle voice calling out his name

   He followed it 

Not knowing where to go

  Or what to do

Only knowing that someone was calling his name

   It might’ve been the wind

It might’ve been in the mind

   It might’ve come from outside of our idea of space/time

     But the voice led him to a little home

Out in the woods 

   He walked up to the door

And gently knocked 

   He heard sobs coming from inside

And two voices

   One voice

Told the other not to answer the door

   The other voice

Brushed her off

   And he heard little footsteps approaching . . .


When the door opened 

   A little red-headed girl stood there

And a blonde lady, around his age, probably,

   Sat down at the table

  A bottle of wine in front of her

Her eyes, red and puffy

   He looked at the red-headed girl

And then to the older lady

   They had both been crying furiously

“Who the hell are you?” the little girl asked him, with a fierce bite in the way she spoke

  “I-I heard my name . . . it led me here.”

   “No one here was saying your name, pal. Now close that door on your way out. It's as cold as death in here,” the lady said. She winced at the word ‘death’ as she said it.

  “Sorry, ma’am. I didn’t mean to disturb you. It’s just—. . . are you two okay?”

“We lost daddy yesterday.”

    The older lady got up and escorted her daughter away from the door. 

“Quite, Violet,” she snapped at the girl. “He doesn’t need to know that.”

“But, he asked us?” she asked, innocently. 

The man stood there, frozen

    Something was happening to him

Something out of his control . . .


    “I lost my wife,” he said, his eyes blank. “A long time ago now. It feels like yesterday, though.”

He looked at them and they were both staring at him, waiting. 

   “She visits me in my dreams every night. Doesn’t matter how much I drink, I still dream of her . . .”

    “Maybe she is trying to tell you something?” the little girl asked. 

“Maybe . . .”

Then the little girl, violet, with the bright red hair, sprinted up to him and hugged him with all the strength she had. 

   He was taken back.

      “Violet!” the lady yelled in protest.

“I’m sorry that your wife died,” she whispered to him, her face buried in his stomach.

       “I’m sorry you lost your father,” he said, looking down at her. 

    She started to cry at these words. 

       He looked around for help but the blonde lady just shrugged. 

The little girl kept her face pressed against his stomach as she cried, squeezing him tighter. 

    Her strength surprised him.

  He looked around again, searching for an answer

“It looks like y’all could use some more firewood?”

“We’ll be fine,” the blonde lady said, crossing her arms. 

   “Yeah . . . I reckon you will be.”

       He looked down at the little girl hugging him tightly, grieving greatly. 

    “What if I came back tomorrow?”

The little girl let go quickly, and looked up at him. “You have to!” 

    He smirked slightly. Then looked up at the lady, who was shaking her head.

“Is that okay?” he asked her.

    “You have to come back!” the little girl answered for her mom, who sighed loudly. 

“I suppose it’s fine. Just bring wine. Okay? You are welcome if you bring wine. A lot of it.”

    He nodded.

“And you have to tell us about your wife!” the little girl added. 

    He felt a lump grow in his throat and a rock sink in his stomach. 

He swallowed the lump down and took a deep breath. 

     “Okay,” he said. “I’ll try.”



And that was the day that he stopped seeing red. 


 


CH 1/6/25

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